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©2008-2009 ~yummcr
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not finished.
I'm still debating on what to do with it.


oh ya watert596552uyjujkocolors

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:icongwynhwyver:
Love your lines! D:

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If you're still working on it, I'd suggest looking at that bottom fourth of it. It's not balanced, and the more I look at it, the more I cringe. The bottom and bottom-right edges of your paper don't seem to be considered at all, which makes the space around them feel dead: zombie, it's-gonna-to-eat-me dead.

Maybe extend the taproot-like extension of your explosion down towards (or past) the bottom of the page to anchor your composition. That, or work your stains (ink? tea? I'm curious) down into the bottom right to activate that corner.

Fix that compositional issue, though, and it's going to be amazing.
:iconyummcr:
I see what you mean. Sometimes, I ignore space that I don't know what to do with. I see what you mean.

I'd like to see what I could do with the stains. (its all water color)

thank you thank you thank you!

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SHAMAZING
this could be a really cool background?

maybe have the subject just slightly out of the center of the 'blob'?


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this is sweets :3

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:iconyummcr:
thank you :giggle:

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